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A Rockin' Eve

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Vinyl Scratch, preparing for the Hearth's Warming Party the night before the Hearth's Warming Eve at the one of the parks at the edge of Manehattan. With the giant Christmas(Or is it "Hearth's Warming tree?) Tree at the side.
 
I know it's early for Christmas, but haha. Thinking of making one more Christmas special though.
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Love your work. However, not particularly this one. By no matter is it bad let me add. But I feel it's a little more lacking than your other works. I'm gonna jump right into this. HERE WE GO

On the pro side I've got to first say this has a feeling of originality, of course, I could always state that it's tradition for us as artists to theme our work based on seasons or occurrences based on seasons and otherwise, but I've never seen Vinyl suited up in this sense, and your background theme fits this nicely as well. The colors collide well and well, it holds its theme well. Love the style that you drew Vinyl in, the snout, and the body, the mane streaks have some variety but hold together in the same style as the show, (most who merge colors make the hairs more singular to the body, I like what you did with it though. I like the urban feel, the merge feels appropriate.

Cons, well, I just feel that you tried to put to much into this image, and placed so much within the pic that it takes it down in looks. Lighting is ok, you shaded Vinyl almost perfectly, (if not perfectly) And the lighting even reflects well on the stage speakers, however, the tree... The light is too heavy, it draws attention away from Vinyl, who I assume is your target of the pic. (The eye, being lazy, is attracted to white space) and the white from the tree is so overpowering. The tree in the background seems slightly unnecessary, and (this is being nit-picky) that building looks a little sloppy. I was honestly drawn right to it when I looked at this pic. It just felt you were trying to put too much in the pic to draw on where this scene is taking place. I feel just a simple stage BG would have worked more appropriately. Maybe put the tree in focus and darken it.

Hope you don't take the rating out of context. It's just one guys opinion on a good piece of work. I don't rate or critique people who can't draw. I critique those who draw well so I can give my unsolicited opinion and dream of becoming as good an artist as people like you.

Good art, good luck in the future, and keep being awesome <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>